19 Nisan 2009 Pazar

Internet

Internet has more negative effects than its positive effects in terms of that it makes us unsocial,that we spend lots of our time on net,that it disturbs our private life .

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  1. I think your thesis statement is ok.It shows the side you defend and it gives the subtopics clearly.

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  2. though i agree with you, the statement you're making remains so shallow as it has no reasons nor any support to back your say. i still agree with the statement.

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